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Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge – Tears and Wine

Posted on September 7, 2015 by Mama Cormier

…..thanks Ronovan for this weeks prompts

Tears and Wine

She looks at his glass

Only drops of wine remain

Her tears flow freely

Rage tears through her core

The wine unleashes a fury

of raw emotions

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Ann Koplow on September 7, 2015 at 2:52 pm said:

Both haikus are great!

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- Mama Cormier on September 7, 2015 at 4:30 pm said:
  
  Thanks Ann for ‘dashing’ by. Much appreciated.
  
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Pat B on September 10, 2015 at 1:02 am said:

Good use of the word tears in two different ways.

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- Mama Cormier on September 13, 2015 at 9:05 am said:
  
  Thanks Pat. Some days these haikus just roll right off my tongue and onto the screen almost effortlessly.
  
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mybeautfulthings on September 10, 2015 at 1:53 am said:

A whole affair in two haikus – I like it! 🙂

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- Mama Cormier on September 13, 2015 at 9:09 am said:
  
  Thanks. I like your interpretation of ‘a whole affair’.
  
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Vashti Quiroz-Vega on September 11, 2015 at 2:41 pm said:

Both haiku are very good and full of truth. Well done. 🙂

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- Mama Cormier on September 13, 2015 at 9:11 am said:
  
  Thanks for your comment and the compliment. It helps boost my confidence as a writer.
  
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edwinasepisodes on September 13, 2015 at 12:34 pm said:

Great Haiku, very emotive 🙂

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- Mama Cormier on September 16, 2015 at 12:21 am said:
  
  Thanks Edwina. I think these words came somewhere deep from within.
  
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Marje @ Kyrosmagica on September 13, 2015 at 1:49 pm said:

Exceptionally good haikus.

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- Mama Cormier on September 16, 2015 at 12:21 am said:
  
  I appreciate the feedback Marje. Thanks for stopping by.
  
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Wordifull Melanie on September 16, 2015 at 12:15 am said:

Wow you just summed up why I don’t drink anymore…lol. I would become very sad…or Very angry!

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- Mama Cormier on September 16, 2015 at 12:22 am said:
  
  I think there’s some truth in these words for many people.
  
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